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    Mera taluq Karachi key aik qadeem basti sey hey..mera naam "Noori" hey ..na janey amma bappu ney yeh naam kiya soch ker rakha..mey ney duniya mey janam letey hi apney liye nafraat hi dekhi ..amma bappu bhai sab mujh sey aisey khaar khatey jaisey mey hi un ki ghurbat aur tangdasti ki wajah hoon..un ka bhi koi qasoor nahi tha..humari basti mey kisi bhi lerki ki pedaish manhous hi tasawour ki jati thi..yahan larki ka janam hona gher per aik bojh hi tasawour kiya jata hey..aik khaney wala monh aur berh gaya..yeh soch thi yahan ki..yahan ziada ter log apna waqt bheek mangney..nashaa kerney aur jinsi karobaar mey guzartey hain..jinsi karoubaar yahan zoroun per hey..yahan charras khulley aam pee jati hey..mera bappu kachi sharrab ka rusiyya hey..us ka wahid shouq kachhi sharrab peena..nashey mey dhutt ho ker gher aana..aur phir amma ko aur mujhey peetna hey..bachpan sey hi bappu key haath pitna mera mammol tha..mujhey nahi yaad kabhi bappu ney pyar sey dekha ho mujhey..amma qareeb key aik bangley mey kam kerti hey..wahan sey bacha khucha khana ley aati hey to hum chaar janoon ka pait paalti hey..amma ki sari kamai to bappu ki sharaab ki nazer ho jati hey…aur kabhi bappu ko nashey key paisey na millain to hum maa beti per bari bhaari hoti hey who raat…mera dubla patla jisam kai din tak bappu key haath sey pitney key baad dukhta rehta…laikin bari sakht jaan thi mey sisak sisak ker jeeti rahi..yunhi lout pout ker apney zakham chatti rahi laikin zinda rahi..sach bari zalim hey yeh zindagi..jab insaan mer jana chahta hey..jab duniya ki bedsoorti us per nanngi hoti hey to seeney sey jaan nahi nikalti..aisa lagta hey jaisey qudrat ka sara nizaam ussey zindagi deney per mamour ho aur jab kabhi dil mey jinney ki ummang ho duniya ki khobsorti apni tammam ter raniyoon key saath apni banhain kholey muntazir ho to farishta-e-ajal humarey rastey rokey khara hota hey..aur hum duniya key karoubaar chour ker sarey dukh dard sey nijaat hasil ker key mout ki goud mey ja sotey hain..yeh mera nazriya hey..zarori nahi key aap bhi is sey muttafiq hon..bus isi tarah rotti dhoti zindagi sisak sisak ker jaisey reengti rahi aur mey bhi bachpan ki serhadon sey hoti jawan ho gai..kuch nahi badla tha..sab waisa hi tha..bappu ney mujhey bhi ab amma key saath bangley per kam per laga diya tha..jawani bhi mujh per khoub tout ker aai thi..woh kehtey hain na key khudda jab hi koi cheez deta hey to phir hissab nahi rakhta to hussun mera bemissaal tha..is basti mey mujh sa haseen koi na tha..jawan to jawan borhey bhi meri chaal per fida they..mey jab jaati to galli key nukker per bethey her mard ki ankhain chahey who borha ho ya jawan sirf merey bhaari kolhoon per hotin..un ki mastani chaal per hoti..meri lachkti kamar per hoti..aur merey dil mey aik fakher ka ehsaas peda hota.bara hi ikhra jisam tha mera..bhaari kolhey..bilkul gol gol ubhri hoi chatyin..jo lagta tha ahi baher challak parain gi…gora rang..lambey baal..aur ander sey mey kitni haseen thi yeh to pochye mat jab kaprey utaarti to apna behka deney wala jisam dekh ker khud hi sherma jatti..yeh wohi din they jab lerkiyan apney gher ka khuwaab dekhtin hain..apney honey waley shoher ka us key jismani lams ka us ki pyaar bhari sansoon ka aur jawani ki tarangoon ka maza leti hain..laikin mey ney abhi kuch nahi socha tha..aur yahan sochney ko tha bhi kiya..wohi gharebi mey jakrey hoye log..koi kamzour sa mard jo pehley hi ghareebi ki chakki mey pistey pistey nidhaal ho chukka ho ga aik din haath paker ker biyah di jaon gi mey..aur phir bus us key kamzour kamzour bachey peda kerna us sey pitna aur raat ko us key neechey lagna aur us ka bister garam kerna hi mra kaam hota jaisa key meri amma ab tak kerti aai thi ya meri sakhiyan jin ki shaddi ho chukkii thi who kertin aain thin..to aisey mey kiya khuwab aur kahan ki jawani …bappu ab bhut borha ho chukka hey..ab who marney key liye uthta hey to us ka haath merey korey aur jawan jisam per aisey hi perta hey goya kisi ney chotti si shaakh sey maara ho.haan us ka hath merey sakht jawan jisam sey lag ker zaror jhanjhna jata tha..woh jhunjhila ker mujhey nangi nagi galiyan sonata..aur mey un galiyon ki mahiyat per ghour kerti akeley mey aur shermati aur kabhi hansti key bappu kaisi gandi gandi batain kerta hey..laikin in baton key to kaan berson sey aadi they..amma ki tarah mey bhi apni kamai bappu keu haath mey hi rakhti..mera aik bhai bhi tha..jis ko mey ney bhut hi kam gher mey dekha tha..aksar to who thanney mey band hota…jab baher hota to bhi bhut kam hi gher aata..woh bappu ki tarah sharaab to na peeta tha laikin cigrate aur charrs us key shaouq they…din bher awara doston mey betha rehta..charras sey bharri cigrates peeta..aur gher aa ker amma sey khanna talab kerta ..ager kahi ussey apna man pasand khanna na milley to who bhi mujhey aur amma ko dhun dalta aur nanngi nangi galiyan deta baher challa jata aur phir kai din tak sourat na dikhata..yeh thi zindagi..jo bus yunhi guzer rahi thi..woh kehtey hain na key dukh aur takleefon key din bhut tawel hotey hain..aur rahaat key din bhut mukhtsir..laikin akhir kitney taweel hotey..aik din zindagi mey thora change aaya..bappu mer gaya…meri aankh mey to aik aanso nahi tha..na amma ki aanakh sey koi aanso tapka..bus basti key kuch log aaye aur bappu ko mitti mey dafan ker key aa gaye..bhai ka kuch pata nahi ntha..na who bappu key merney per aaya…kuch din to amma ney bappu key mefrney ka soug manaya…basti key log kiya kehtey..bhut hi jald humari zindagi wapis lout aai..ab hum maa beti hi rehtey they..apney makaan mey..makaan kiya tha.do kamroon ki aik jhuggi sit hi.jissey lakrion ki boseda si chat ney dhaanp rakh tha..jab barsih hoti to hum raat bher chat key nechey bhegtey kanptey raat guzartey laikin chaat to thi..itna hi kaafi tha..hum maa beti bhut kam baat kertey laikin amma mera khayyal rakhtin thin…ab hum dono pait bher kr khana khati aur kuch paisey bhi bacha liya kertin thin..kion key ab humari kammai leney wala bappu duniya mey nahi tha..laikin humari yeh khushi bus kuch din hi reh sakki…Aik raat mey din bher ki thakki gehri nend so rahi thi key amma key cheekhney ki awaaz ney mujhey bedaar ker diya mey herbaria ker uth bethi…baher nikal ker dekha to bhai maa key baal paker ker ussey burri tarah maar raha tha..woh amma sey paisey maang raha tha..apney nashey key liye ..us ka nasha tout raha tha..woh dewaana hua jar aha tha..mey amma ki yeh hallat dekh ker amma ki taraf bhaagi aur bhai sey usey churwaney ki koshish kerney lagi..bhai key aik do kararey haath merey badan per bhi parey..laikin yeh jawan jisam tha..kuch khaas asaar na hua..mey ney apney graibaan sey nikaal ker us key haath mey paisey rakh diye..bhai paisey leta hua bola.."Bari Gehri jaga chuppa ker rakhti hey aaj kal..kiya koi yaar pata liya hey tou ney..?"
    Bhai key monh sey aisi begherti ki baat sun ker muhey bhut bura laga..laikin abhi us sey kuch kehna fuzol tha..us ka nasha pora nahi hua tha..woh abhi kisi ko nahi pehchanta tha..woh apisey liye fatehmandi sey baher challa gaya..aur peechey apni behen aur terpti amma ko chour gaya..amma ki borhi hadiyon mey ab dam na tha..saari zindagi shoher key haath sey maar khai thi ab jawan betey key haath sey pit ker us ki hadiyan bol gayen thin…agley din subah who bister sey lag gai..us sey uthha hi na jar aha tha..shayyad koi pasli utter gai thi us ki..us roz mey kaam per akeli hi gai..mey jis bangley per kaam kerti thi wahan do mia biwi raha kertey they..begum sahiba ko to apni parties sey aur social work sey fursat na milti aur sahib baher hi rehtey they..un ko bhut hi kam mey ney gher per dekha tha…Aur phir her raat hi yeh honey laga..yeh aik aisi hi raat ka zikkar hey..meri aankh serdi sey khul gai..peeshab bhi aa raha tha..mey uth ker gher sey baher angun mey banney bathroom ki taraf gai…mey ney dekha baher angun mey bhai apney do doston key saath betha hua hey..aur who teeno beech mey aik candle jalaye apni naak key rastey aik sufaaid sa powder baari baari khench rahey hain..is tarah charras mey ney kahi kisi ko peetey na dekha tha..bhut jeeb sa laga mujhey ..woh teeno bhi meri taraf dekhney lagey..bhai nashey sey bhari awaz mey bola "Chal na ja na abhi yahan sey kion kharri hey idher.."
    Mey gerbera gai.."Bhai peeshab kerney aai thi.."
    Who teeno hansney lagey bhai bola.."Chal jaldi mout..yahan hi karey gi kiya..?"
    Who phir begherton ki tarah hansney lagey mey jaldi sey bathroom mey ja ker farigh hoi ..aur ander kamrey mey bhaag gai un teeno key hansney ki awazain kaafi dair tak aati rahi..mey ney apney bhai key paas bethey un dono shetanoon ki ankhoon mey jinsi bhook mehsous ker lit hi..woh raal tapkatey merey jisam ko ghour rahey they..un dono ko mey ney ilaqey mey pehli baar hi dekha tha..yehi sochti mey neend ki wadiyon mey kho gai…agley din subah mey akeli hi kaam per gai..amma ki tabiyat theek nahi thi..Us din shaam mey gher aatey mey ney apney rastey mey unhi dono ko dekha..woh mujhey hi dekh rahey they un mey sey aik ney mujhey dekh ker aik ganda sa ishara kiya aur hansney lagey..woh kuch dour merey peechey aaye phir mey jaldi sey gher mey ghus gai…Raat mey bhai ko bulaney aaye..mey ney hi derwaza kholla..un dono ko dekh ker nafrat sey monh ban gaya mera.."Bhai kahan hey tera.."

    Mey boli.."Mujhey kiya pata..bata ker thorey hi jata hey..ja baher kahin dhondh ley."
    Who bhokki nigahon sey dekhtey challey gaye..
    Khan kha ker mey soney lait gai..Raat ko na janey ki peher meri aankh khul gai..mey amma key saath hi so rahi thi..mey ney apni kameez key ander aik bhari merdana haath rengta mehsous kiya..jo meri jawan chatiyon tak pohncney ki ksohish ker raha tha..phir who haath kameez key opper sey hi meri obhti hoi chatiyan dheerey dheerey dabaney laga..mey dar gait hi..mera dimaagh neend ki jhounk mey tha..mey samjh hi nahi paai thi yeh kiya ho raha hey bus dam sadhey pari thi..phir aik saaya sa merey opper jhukka aur kisi key hont merey nazuk hontoon per jam gaye..saath hi dono ranoon key beech meri intehai nazuk jaga per aik haath aa gaya aur ahista ahista meri ranoon key dermiyan halki si ubhri jaga ko holey sey sehlaney laga..lazat sey meri ankhain band honey lagin..laikin dar ab tak ghalib tha..na janey yeh kon tha..woh jo koi bhi tha us ki saansain tez honey lagin thin..aur us ka haath ab meri ranoon key dermiyan naram-o-nazuk si gulaabi jaga ko teezi sey maslney laga tha..mey ney halka sa geela pan mehsous kiya…aik dam jaisey mera dimagh jag gaya..yeh kon mard tha jo merey korey badan sey khel raha tha..mey aik dam uth bethi aur zor sey cheekhi..woh jo koi bhi tha herbaria ker baher bhaga..amma meri cheekh sun ker uth bethi aur baher bhagtey dekh ker cheekhti galiya deti baher ko aai..waha bhai nashey mey dhut para tha aur us key who dono dost derwaza khol ker baher bhaag rahey they..amma pather uthaye un key peechey bhagin..laikin who ghayyab ho chukkey they..amma galiya detin ander aayen aur bhai ko jhinjhor jhinjhor ker ussey galiyan deney lagi..laikin who besudh tha..najaney yeh kaisa nashaa tha jo insaan ko us ki behen ki izaat take y ghafil ker deta tha..amma galiyan deti ander aaia ru ander aa ker us ney apni chaaar pai derwazey sey laga ker us per so gai ..ab mujh tak koi na aa sakta tha..us raat pehli baar mey ney apni maa key liye mohabbat mehsous ki..woh kaiss bhi thi apni beti ki izaat ki hifazat ke rahi thi..woh akhir meri maa thi…agli subah meri aankh amma key zor zor sey chekney sey khulli bhai amma ko phir maar raha tha..mey un dono key beech aa khari hoi..amma chilla chilla ker ussey keh rahi thi..key us ka koi awara dost aaj key baad is gher mey nahi aayega..aur who amma ko galiyan dey raha tha..merey liye nangi batain ker raha tha key teri beti konsi sawtri hey kon konsey ghaat ka paani peeti hey tujhey kiya maloom …who apni saggi behen key liye yeh keh raha tha..akhir who galiyan deta baher chala gaya..ab humarey pass ussey deney ko paisey bhi na they..gher mey aik do chezain thin..jo bappu sey bach gain thin..aik transistor radio tha..aik dewargeer gharri thi..woh pehley hi bech chukka tha..us ka nasha pora honey ka ab koi asraa na tha aur yeh baat usey aur bherka rahi thi..gher mey kuch khaney key liye na tha…mey bhokey pait hi kaam per challi gai..amma gher per akeli hi reh gai..dopher key qareeb mohalley ka aik bacha bangley per aaya amujhey bola key meri amma mer gai hey jaldi challo..mujhey aisa laga jaisey merey qadmoon sey zameen sirak gai..aik kamzor sa hi sahi meri maa mera sahara thi..ab who sahara bhi chin chukka tha..ab mey akeli thi is bereham duniya mey kehmneyko bhai tha laikin who bhai kahan tha..bhai bhala aisey hotey hain..bhai to muhafiz hotey hain apni behnoon key..rakhwaley hotey hain us ki izaat key aur who to na janey kon tha..mey bhagam bhaag gher pohnchi..amma samney hi chaar pai per murdaa pari thi..yeh wohi chaar pai thi jis per pichli raat who apni beti ki hifazat key khatir derwazey sey laga ker soi thi aur aaj us ki laas wahan pari thi..mey bhut roi apni maa key merney per laikin bhala kabhi koi roney sey wapis aaya tha..woh raat mey ney akeley hi kaati..gher jaisey mattam ker raha tha..pora gher ro raha tha..mey saari raat ussi chaar pai sey laggi bethi rahi jis per lait ker maa ney meri kal hifazat kit hi..maa ko shaam mey hi dafna diya gaya tha..bhai maa ko kandha deney bhi na aaya..na janey kis naali mey nashaa ker key para raha..raat ko bhi na aaya..aur mey akeli hi pari roti rahi..agley din kaam per bhi nahi gai..bangley wali begum sahiba ney merey liye khana aur kuch paisey bhijwa diye they…laikin mujhey ab paison ki nahi aik aisey saharey ki zarorat thi jo mujhey is duniya key un darindo sey bacha sakey jo ab apney daant nakosey bhokki nazron sey meri taraf dekh rahey they..woh jantey they ab mey akeli hon…besahara hon…mey un ka kuch nahi bigaar sakti…

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