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    Default Yaadgaar saza

    Dosto yeh story post karnay say pehlay main yeh bata doon. Kay yeh story aik Pakistani Muslim aurat aur aik Indian Hindu mard par base hai.

    Jo loag is tara ki stories perna pasand nahi kartay, Un say request hai kay is story ko pernay say PERHAIZ karain please.

    Dosto main nay yeh story NET par aik web site par pari hai. Jisay aik Pakistani writer nay English main likha hai.

    Main nay jub yeh story perhi to mujay achi lagi. Is par main nay socha kay kion na main hi is story ko apnay hisab say roman urdu main likoon.

    Is story ka ORIGINAL IDEA to is kay ORIGINAL writer ka hai.

    Magar main nay is main apnay hisab say thori si change karnay ki JASARAT ki hai.

    Meri yeh koish app ko kitni pasand ati hai. Is kay liy mujay aap kay comments ka intizar rahay ga.

    Shukriya.

    PAJAL20


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    YAADGAAR SAZA



    24 sala Mrs Fozia Gilani apni shadi ke foran baad hi apne shohar Javed kay sath Pakistan se America ke aik city Fremont California mein move ho gai thi.

    Fozia ki shadi ke baad Pakistan ki rawaiti sasoon ki terha Fozia ki saas ki bhi yeh hi khawahish thi. Kay Fozia shadi ke pehlay saal hi un kay betay kay bachay ki maa ban jaiy.

    Magar Javed chonaky apni biwi ki tang choot ka maza ziyada arsay lena chaata tha. Is liye shadi hotay hi Javed ne Fozia ko nah sirf pregrency ronkay wali golian khilana shuru kar den.

    Bulkay chudai ke douran Javed jab bhi farigh honay lagta. To wo foran apne lun ko apni biwi ki pudi se nikaal kar apne lan ke pani ko Fozia ki choot ke labon ya is ke pait par hi kharij karta tha

    Fozia apni shadi shuda zindagi aur apne shohar Javed Ahmed se bohat khush thi.

    Magar yeh khushi aik hafta qabal is waqt khatam ho gayi. Jab mulazmat ke douran Javed ne apni Indian IT consulting company firm Sudha technology solution inc (STS) ke sab se barray aur achay client ko apni ghalti aur bawa kufi se lose kar diya tha.

    Fozia janti thi ke is ka shohar Javed aaj kal is wajah se bohat hi pareshan tha.

    Kion kay ke isi IT firm ne hi Javed ko is ki qabliyat ki bana par Dubai se select kar ke work visa par America mein nokari di thi.

    Is company ka indian maalik Mr Sunil Kumar kal shaam hi India se wapas America aya tha. Aur atay sath hi us ne phone kar kay Javed ko dosray din job ke douran hi lunch time mein apne ghar mein mulaqaat ke liye bulaa liya tha.

    Apni company ke maalik ki yeh call suntay hi Javed ko is baat ka paka yaqeen ho gaya tha. Kay Mr kumar se honay wali yeh pehli mulaqaat hi Javed ke liye aakhri mulaqaat sabit ho gayi. Aur Javed ko apni ghalti ka khumyaza nokari se chuti ki soorat mein bugatna paray ga.

    Yeh hi wajah thi ke agli subah job par jatay huve Javed ki pareshani mein bohat ziyada izafah ho chuka tha

    Idhar Javed apni is parshani mein mubtala tha. To doosri taraf is ki nihayat khobsorat aur wafa daar biwi Fozia ki haalat bhi is se mukhtalif nahi thi.

    Apne shohar ke office jaany ke baad aik safaid sleve less blouse aur siyah kapri mein malbous ho kar study table par behti Fozia apni thori par haath rakh kar aik gehri soch mein doobi hui thi.

    "Javed pichlay kuch hafton say bohat khaufzadah hai! woh sochta hai ke is barray account ko khonay ki Padaash mein, Mr kumar usay aaj kal mein nokari se zaroor nikaal dain gay" Apne shohar ki pareshani ke barey mein sochate huve Fozia ke dil mein is waqt yeh khayaal chal raha tha.

    “Magar mujhe umeed hai ke aisa nahi ga "Fozia nay sochatay huway apne aap ko umeed dilai.

    “Ho sakta hai ke Mr Kumar Javed ko nokari se nikaalte ki bajaiy, sirf aik warning day kar hi chore den, waisay agar Javed ko nokari se haath dhona paray, to un dono ko America mein rehne mein kaafi takleef ho gayi. Kion kay un ke green card jisay STS nay hi un ke liye sponser kya tha, woh bhi abhi taq nahi aya tha.Fozia apni unhi sochon mein gum thi ke itnay mein is ki nazar paas paray table par pari.

    Jahan aik kaghaz para hwa tha. Jis par is ke shohar Javed nay kal raat apne boos ke ghar ka address aur phone number likha tha.

    Is kaghaz par nazar parte hi Fozia ko Mr Sunil kumar ke mutlaq kahi gayi apne shohar Javed ki baat yaad aayi" Ke suneney mein aya hai ke Mr kumar aik bohat achay aur dusroon ki madad karne walay insaan hain"

    "Agar waqai hi asi baat hai, to kion na Javed se pehlay mein khud Mr kumar se mil kar unay is baat par qaail karne ki koshish karoon, ke woh Javed ko nokari se nikalnay ki bajay aik warning day kar hi chore den" Apne shohar ko subah pareshani ki haalat mein job par jatay huway dekh kar Fozia khud bhi bohat pershan ho chuki thi.

    Isi liye Javed ki gai ghalti ko khud suljhany ka yeh khayaal is ke dil mein is waqt anay laga tha.

    "Magar kahin yeh nah ho ke Javed ki bajaiy mera jana, Mr kumar ko acha na lagey aur is waja say Javed ka kaam sudhernay ki bajaiy pehlay se ziyada kharab ho jaiy" Mr Kumar se milnay ka khayaal dil mein atay hi Fozia ke dil mein is wus wasay nay janam liya .

    Lakin is ke sath hi" Jo ho ga dekha jaye ga" ka sochate huway Fozia nay paas paray is paper se phone number dekh kar apne shohar ke boos ko call mila di.

    Number dial karne ke thori der baad jon hi Fozia ko phone ke doosri taraf se aik mard ki aawaz sunai di. To is nay aik dam English main apna taroof karwaya “Hello, Mr Kumar my name is Mrs Fozia Javed, my husband Javed Ahmed works for you in Sudah technology "

    " Ohhh, is’t the same Javed who is meeting me this afternoon right?” Fozia ki baat kay jawab main phone kay dusri teraf say Mr Sunil Kumar nay pucha.

    “Yes, yes same Javed, who is meeting you today ” Mr Sunil Kumar kay sawal ka jawab detay huway Fozia juldi say boli.

    " Acha aap bitayen ke mein aap ki kya madad kar sakta hon" Fozia ka jawab sun kar Mr kumar nay english ki bajaiy is baar Fozia say hindi main poocha .

    "Sab se pehlay to meri aap se aik request hai, ke baray meharbani Javed ko mat bitayen ke mein nay aap ko call ki hai, doosri baat yeh ke asal mein Javed ki aap se mulaqaat se pehlay mein aap se milna chaah rahi thi, kion ke mein aap se mil kar sirf is baat ki wazahat karna chahti hon, ke mere shohar Javed apni ki gayi ghalti se kitney ziyada pareshan hain" Kumar sahib kay jawab main is baar Fozia nay bi unay urdu main hi jawab detay huway kaha.

    " Acha theek hai, agar aap aik ghantay ke andar mujhe mil sakti hain to mein aap ka intzaar kar sakta hon" Fozia ki baat sun kar phone ki doosri taraf se Mr kumar nay jawab diya.

    " Gee mein aik ghantay ke andar andar aap ke ghar poanch sakti hon" Mr Kumar ka jawab suntay hi Fozia boli aur phir phone band karte sath hi shower ki taraf dor pari .

    Apne jism jo achi terha shower dainay ke baad Fozia bath room se bahar aayi. Aur apne giilay jism ko toliye se achi terha se saaf aur khushk karne ke baad



    woh nangi haalat mein hi sofay par baith kar apni lambi heal ko apne paon mein pahannay lagi .

    Apni heel wali jooti paon mein pehan kar Fozia taizi ke sath bad ke sheeshay ke samnay khari hui.



    Aur isi nangi haalat mein hi jaldi jaldi apne munh par make up karne lagi.

    Make up se farigh hotay hi Fozia nay almaari se aik western stayel ka aik lamba drees nikaal kar pehan liya.

    " Mein dekhnay mein achi lag rahi hon nah" Apne gudaaz jism ko aienay mein dekhte hue Fozia nay apne baal ko thora sa thora sa set karte huve apne aap se kaha .

    Is ke sath hi Fozia nay table par para apna cell phone utha kar Google map mein Mr Kumar ke ghar ka pata dala. aur phir apni car mein baith kar woh Mr Kumar ke ghar ki taraf chal pari .

    " Haiiiiiii Javed ki gayi ghalti ko sudhartay sudhartay apne shohar ka kaam bigaar hi nah don kahin" Sunil Kumar ki rehaish gaah ki taraf apni car doratay huve Fozia ke dil mein yeh hi khauf chaaya raha.

    Magar is khauf ke bawajood is nay ab wapas palatna munasib nah samhja. Aur phir kuch hi der baad is ki car Mr Kumar ke ghar ke samnay ja ruki.

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    Yet another long awaited story by one of my favorite writer... bhut acha start ... please keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by guest01 View Post
    Yet another long awaited story by one of my favorite writer... bhut acha start ... please keep it up
    Thank u so much for your kind words my friend..

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    Sunil Kumar ke ghar ke samnay apni gari park kar ke Fozia nay jon hi apni car se bahar nikal kar Mr Kumar ke ghar ke main door ki taraf walk karna shuru kiya.



    To thandhi hawa ka aik taaza johnka aik dam se aa kar is ke taaza taaza nahaiy huve badan se takra gaya.

    "Ufff Mr Kumar se milnay ki jaldi mein apni panty to panty, mein to apni bura bi pehnana bhool gayi hon aaj" Taaza hawa nay dress ke andar ghis kar jon hi Fozia ki jawan chooot aur is ki kisi hui gudaaz chatiyon ko choua. To apni ghalti ka ehsas karte hi Fozia aik dam bokhla uthi .

    "Hiii ab ghar wapas ja kar bra aur panty pahannay ka waqt nahi hai mere paas, is liy ab muje isi haalat mein hi Mr Kumar se milna paray ga" Fozia ko apni is



    bawaqufi par afsos to bohat huwa. Magar ab time ki kami ki wajah se is ka ghar ja kar wapas aana bohat mushkil kaam tha. Is liye nah chahtay huve bhi woh Mr Kumar ke ghar ke darwazay ki taraf apne qadam barhaati rahi .

    Mr Kumar ke main door ke samnay ruk kar Fozia nay apni bikhri saanson ko sambla. Aur phir himmat kar ke dosray lamhay hi darwazay par dastak day di.

    Fozia ki dastak ke jawab mein thori der baad taqreban 45 saal ki umar ke aik admi nay darwaaza khola. Jo apni umar ke hisaab se kaafi fit lag raha tha.

    Darwazay par kharray is aadmi ko dekhte hi Fozia aik halki muskurahat ke sath boli" Mr Kumar mein Javed Ahmed ki biwi Fozia hon, mujhe mulaqaat ke liye waqt dainay ke liye aap ka bohat bohat shukriya "

    " Well aap se mil kar bohat aacha laga, plzzzz aap andar tashreef layein" Fozia ki baat ke jawab mein Mr Kumar nay bi muskura kar jawab diya aur apne ghar ka darwaaza khol kar Fozia ko andar anay ki dawat di.

    Fozia Mr Kumar ke sath sath chalti hui un ke living room mein chali aayi. Aur phir kamray main enter hotay sath hi Fozia nay kamray ki setting ka jaiza liya.

    Living room mein aik taraf aik bara sofa rakha hwa tha. Sofay ke samnay aik bohat bara sheeshay ka table para huwa tha.

    Jab ke kamray ki doosri janib do sofa numa chairs pari hui theen. Aur un chairs ke darmiyan mein aik side table thi. Jis ki wajah se un dono mein thora faasla tha.

    Apne shohar ke boos ke living room ki setting dekhnay ke baad Fozia



    aahista aahista chalti hui kamray mein rakhi chair par baith gayi. Aur Fozia ke baithtay hi side table ki doosri taraf rakhi chair par Kumar sahib bhi tashreef farma ho ge.

    Apni chair par baith kar Kumar sahib nay Fozia ki taraf dekha aur bolay" Mujhe khoshi hai ke mujhe pehli baar aap se milnay ka mauqa mil raha hai! waisay mujhe yeh kehnay mein koi haraj nahi ke Javed bohat khush qismat insaan hai, jisay aap jaisi khobsorat biwi mili hai, jo khobusrat honay ke sath sath apne shohar ke liye fikar mand bhi hai! ab mujhe batayen ke aap kyun itni pareshan hain aur aap ki pershani daur karne mein kaisay mein aap ki help kar sakta hon! "

    " Mr Kumar mein asal mein apne shohar ke mutlaq aap se baat karna chaah rahi thi, mein janti hon ke mere shohar Javed nay jo ghalti ki hai, is ka aap ki company ko kaafi nuqsaan pouncha hai aur ho sakta hai saza ke tor par Javed ko aap aaj nokari se bi nikaal den, magar is ke bawajood mein aap ko yeh batana chahti hon, ke Javed apni is ghalti par bohat parshan aur sharminda hai "

    Yeh baat karte huway Fozia nay iltijai nazron se Kumar sahib ki taraf dekha aur apni baat jari rakhtay huway kaha" Javed nay mujhe aap ke baray mein bataya tha, ke aap bohat achay aur ghalatiyan maaf karne walay insaan hain, aur apne shohar ki isi baat par yaqeen kar ke mein aap ke paas yeh request le kar aayi hon, ke agar ho sakay to mere shohar ki ghalti ko nazar andaaz karte huway usay aik baar maaf kar den plzzzz" Apne dil ki baat karte hi Fozia nah jaany kyun apne jazbaat par qaboo nah rakh payi. Jis ki bana par is ki aankhon mein ansoo aa ge aur woh apne hathon ko apni aankhon par rakh kar aik daham se ronay lagi.

    Fozia ke is terhan achanak ronay ki asal wajah darasal yeh thi. Ke Javed aur Fozia nay do wake pehlay hi apna ghar kharidne ke liye down payment ki thi. Aur agar aaj Javed apni nokari se haath dho baithta tha. To un ke maali halaat kaafi kharab ho satke thay.

    Kion ke apni ab tak ki saving to woh log pehlay hi naya ghar kharidne mein kharch kar chuke thay. Aur ab Javed ki job khatam honay ki soorat mein un dono mian biwi ke liye pardes mein apne ghar ka kharcha chalana kaafi mushkil ho sakta tha.

    Mr Kumar se baat karne ke douran jab Fozia ke zehan mein yeh baat aayi. To apni anay walay maali mushkilaat ka soch kar Fozia ki aankhon se ansoo khud ba khud jari ho ge. Aur woh apne hathoon ko apne mun par rakh kar bachon ki terhan phoot phoot kar ronay lag gayi .

    Fozia apne hathoon ko aankhon par rakh kar abhi isi terha ronay mein masroof thi.Kay usay apne kandhay ki naram jild par Mr Kumar ke sakht mardana hathoon ka ehsas hawa .

    Mr Kumar ke haath ko apne kandhay par mehsoos karte hi Fozia nay aik dum apna rona band karte huway apne hathoon ko apni aankhon se hata kar peechay ki taraf dekha. To is ki nazar apni chair ke peechay kharray Kumar sahib par pari. Jo Fozia kay pichay kharay ho kar is ke kandhay par apna haath rakh kar massage karte huway usay dilaasa dainay ki koshish kar rahay thay.

    Apne jism ke kisi bi hissay par aik ajnabi mard ke hathoon ka laams pehli baar mehsoos karte hi sharam ke maaray Fozia ke jism ko aik jur jurai si mehsoos hui.

    Aur is nay be ikhtiyaari mein apne haath ko oopar uthatay huway apne kandhay par rakhay huway Mr Kumar kay haath ko apne jism se allag kar diya .

    Fozia ka yun un ka haath ko apne kandhay se jutkanay wala amal Mr Kumar ko acha nahi laga tha .

    Isi liye Mr Kumar nay jisay hi yeh dekha ke Fozia nay ab rona band kar diya hai. To woh Fozia ke peechay se hut kar Fozia ke samnay se hotay huway dobarah apni chair ki taraf bherne lagey.

    "Lagta hai apne kandhay se yoon un ka haath ko hataane ka mera yeh tareeqa Kumar sahib ko shayad acha nahi laga, is liye woh shayad ghusse ke aalam mein mujh se paray ho rahay hain" Kumar sahib ki body language ko dekhte hi Fozia ko apni ghalti ka ehsas huwa .

    Is liye Kumar sahib peechay se chaltay huway jon hi chair par behti Fozia ke ain samnay aiy. To Fozia ko najane kiya sojhi ke is nay aik dum se apna haath agay karte huway Kumar sahib ke haath ko apne haath ki girift mein le liya .

    "Mr Kumar kiya aisa koi tareeqa hai ke aap Javed ko aik chance mazeed day den plzzzz" Kumar sahib ke haath ko apne haath mein tham tay huway chair par behti Fozia nay apne samnay kharray Sunil sahib ki aankhon mein ankhen daal kar aik baar phir iltija ki .

    "Haan aik cheez aisi hai jisay karne se Javed ki nokari bach sakti hai" Fozia ki baat sun kar Mr Kumar nay Fozia ke haath ki garift se apna haath churatye huway ab ki baar Fozia ke haath ko apne haath mein thamtay huway jawab diya.

    " Ooooooooooooo to phir jaldi se batayen nah, ke is ke liye kiya karna ho ga mujhe" Mr Kumar ke mun se yeh baat suntay hi Fozia nay aik dam be cheeni se poocha .

    Fozia ki baat suntay hi Mr Kumar nay apne haath mein pakdae huway Fozia ke haath ko apni taraf khincha aur phir dosray hi lamhay is ke naazuk aur mulaem haath ko paint mein kisay apne loray ke ain oopar rakh kar bola" Tumari baat ka jawab tumari ungliyoon ke neechay hai "

    Fozia to apne shohar Javed ke munh se Kumar sahib ki sharafat aur achhai ke qissay sun kar madad ki gharz se yahan aayi thi .

    Magar bay zahir shareef nazar anay walay is udhair umar shakas ki is sharamnaak harkat ko dekhte hi Fozia par herat ka aik pahar toot para.

    Is kay sath hi woh ankhen phaar kar Mr Kumar ki taraf dekhnay lagi. Aur phir Kumar sahib ke lun par jamay apne haath ko hatanay ki koshish karte huway aik dum se Fozia ke mun se nikla" kiyyyaaaا matlab hai aap ka Kumar sahab "

    " Tum koi doodh peeti bachi nahi ke meri is baat ka matlab nah samajh saku" Fozia ki baat ka jawab dete sath hi Kumar sahib nay Fozia ke haath ko apne lun par mazeed zor se dabaya.

    To Fozia ke naram haath ke lams se Kumar sahib ka lun josh mein utahtay huway pint mein taizi phoolnay phalnay laga.

    Jis ki bana par Fozia ko is baat ka foran andaza ho gaya ke Kumar sahib ka" hathyaar" Javed ke hathyaar ke muqablay mein kaafi bura hai.

    " Nahi nahi mein yeh nahi kar sakti, kion ke mein nay aaj tak apne husband ke siwa kisi aur ke sath aisa koi kaam nahi kiya" Kumar sahib ki baat ka matlab achi terha samajtay huway Fozia nay jawab diya. Aur is ke sath is nay Kumar sahib ke loray par dabey apne haath ko aik baar un ke haath se chhuranay ki koshish ki .

    Magar is baar bi Kumar sahib nay is ki yeh koshish nakaam banatay huway Fozia ke haath ko apne loray par jamaiy rakha aur bolay" Koi baat nahi agar pehlay kabhi nahi kiya to aaj kar lo, kion ke apne shohar ki job bachanay ke liye mere lun ki muth laganay ka soda bura nahi begum Fozia ".

    Kumar sahib ke mun se niklny walay yeh ganday alfaaz sun kar Fozia poora wajood sharam ke maaray kanpnay laga aur wo aik dam boli" Nahi mujh se nahi ho ga yeh sab "

    Is ke sath hi Fozia nay Kumar sahib ki taraf dekhtey huway aik baar phir iltija ki" mujhe janay dain please" Aur yeh kehtay huway is nay chair se uthnay ki koshish bhi ki .

    " Itni bhi kiya jaldi hai Fozia jee. .. ." Fozia ko chair se uathtay dekh kar Kumar sahib nay apne dosray haath se Fozia ke kunday ko zor se dabatay huway usay uthnay se roknay ke douran kaha.

    Apne sath honay wala Mr Kumar ka bartao aur is ki najaaiz farmaaish sun kar Fozia yeh baat ab achi terha samajh hi chuki thi. Kay is ke shohar ka boss Mr Kumar koi acha ensaan nahi hai.

    Magar is ke bawajood aik akhri koshish kay toor par wh boli" Mr Kumar Javed ki help karen please "

    Yeh baat kehte huway Fozia ki aawaz bhar aayi aur Kumar sahib ke shikanjay se nah nikal panay ka soch kar us ki aankhon se aanswoun aik baar phir se phoot paray .

    "Dekhain begum Javed, aap ke husband nay bohat bari ghalti ki hai jis ki wajah se nah sirf hamari company ko kaafi nuqsaan hwa hai, balkay hamara customer bhi hum se kaafi naraaz ho gaya hai" Mr Kumar nay Fozia ko aik baar phir yoon rota dekh kar usay samjhane ki koshish to ki. Lakin is ke sath sath hi wo apne lun par Fozia ke haath ka dabao bhi berhata raha.

    " Mein aap ki is baat ko samajh sakti hon, magar aap jo kay rahay hain woh mere liye nah mumkin amal hai" Kumar sahib ki baat ka jawab dete huway Fozia nay apne haath ko is ke lun se hataane ki aik aur nakaam koshish ki.

    Magar Kumar sahib ke haath ki mazboot girift ki wajah se is baar bi woh apni is koshish mein kamyaab nah ho saki .

    " Fozia jee aap ki itla ke liye aap ko bata don, ke aik single mard honay ka natey chunkay mere apne koi bachay nahi, isi liye yeh company mujhe apne bachon ki terha Aziz hai, mein aik karobari aadmi hon, aur jis maqam par aaj mein hon, is maqam tak koi bhi cheez free mein kisi ko day kar nahi pauncha ja sakta, jis kaam ke liye aap mere paas aayi hain, mere liye yeh bhi aik karobari deal hi hai, aap mujh se aik bari cheez maang rahi ho, badlay mein aap se mein itni hi bari cheez ki demand kar raha hon, aap chahain to meri offer ko rud kar sakti hain, is soorat mein aap ko abhi ke abhi yahan se jana ho ga, kyun ke mera waqt bohat qeemti hai, is liye mein apna waqt waste karna pasand nahi karta" Is ke sath hi Mr Kumar nay apne lun par paray Fozia ke haath ko hata kar is ki goad mein rakh diya. To Fozia ko sukoon sa mehsoos hwa aur is nay rona band kar diya.

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    bohat achi kahani ja rahi hai , lafzon ka chunao aur tasulsul bohat umda hai , next update ka wait rahy ga

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    bht Zabrdst hot story dear pajal20 great job

    pics ka tarka bht ala.

    dear pajal20 ap inpage ma b story tehrir krain..

    wesy kia hi acha hota k ap isy inpage ma tehrir krty.

    chalo khair next story sahi...

    keep it up dear.

    next hot update ka Intzar rahe ga dear

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    Story bouht hi zabrdast haay aor behtreen haay. Magr Aesy country mein jahan qanoon ki kafi sakhti haay driving licence kafi mushkil hay fozia aasaaani saay driving kr rhi haay jesy mureedkay hoo. Abhi new new shifting huwi haay to writer ji dont mind thora saa ap coherence mein rahain.

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    awesome story...

    nice start

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    Quote Originally Posted by paaap View Post
    Story bouht hi zabrdast haay aor behtreen haay. Magr Aesy country mein jahan qanoon ki kafi sakhti haay driving licence kafi mushkil hay fozia aasaaani saay driving kr rhi haay jesy mureedkay hoo. Abhi new new shifting huwi haay to writer ji dont mind thora saa ap coherence mein rahain.
    Dost sadko jaoon aap ki in barkiyoon kay.

    Paa ji aap aik baat bhool rahay hain kay UF garam stories ki aik site hai. Na kay NADRA ya MOTORWAY police ka koi license office jahan paar kisi kay driving license ki jaanch pertaal ki jati hai.

    Wasay bi kisi dusray mulak main ja kar driving karna aaj kaal koon sa issue hai sir. Waisay agar aap kay ilaam mahi nahi to aap ka bata doon kay agar aap kay pass Pakistani international license ho aap duniya ka taqreban sabhi countires main driving kar saktay hain janab.

    Berhaal aap kay comments aur support ka bohat bohat SHUKIRA dost.....

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    Quote Originally Posted by hot_irfan View Post
    bht Zabrdst hot story dear pajal20 great job

    pics ka tarka bht ala.

    dear pajal20 ap inpage ma b story tehrir krain..

    wesy kia hi acha hota k ap isy inpage ma tehrir krty.

    chalo khair next story sahi...

    keep it up dear.

    next hot update ka Intzar rahe ga dear
    Dost jesa kay aap jantay hain kay inpage main likhna bohat mushkil kaam hai. Is liy filhaal to main isay roman main hi likh rha hoon. Lakin agar kabi time nikaal sakat to inpage main bi shayed isay covert kar doon.

    Aap kay comments aur support ka bohat bohat shukira...

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